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Post by Kyouken Uchiha Wed Nov 26, 2008 12:03 am

It has been decades since Kudara had return to Konoha. He wasnt an enemy of Konoha but yet he was not an ally. He never like the methods of Konoha but he always protected it in its time of needs. He's has become a missing nin since he was "killed" by his brother. The villagers, the shinobi and even the Konoha were persuaded that his brother killed him but they were all under a major genjutsu that twisted there minds.

Kudara walks into the ramen shop. It had obviously change but the daughter of the orginal founder was still there and she had a child. He smiles knowing that the daughter would not of regonized his face. He remember her having a slight crush on his brother. Undoubtly, she would have forgotten of them cause time does age the mind. Kudara sits down at the end of the bar. He ask for ramen, simple with onions and leeks. It was his favorite and he adorn it since he was a little child. Kudara leans up against the wall of the shop. He thinks back to the good times he had here. The cherish moments that him, his brother, his mother and all the friends that he had made when he was a child. But also the bad, awful and bloody past that he had commited which made him sick to his stomach sometimes. Thinking about the shinobi they had killed, decapitated, chopped, incinerated, burn, and probably all the terrible attacks he performed. Although it was good for Konoha, seeing that they were the one's that saved the village countless times and stopped the fourth shinobi war but the ways of achieving that goal was awful for Kudara to think about.

When they served him his food, he inhales the simple but yet complex smells of the the ramen. The aromatic smells of the onions and leeks inside of his ramen made him smile alittle bit. He begins to eat his ramen slowly as though he was waiting for somebody to show.
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Post by Kaji-Kanto Wed Nov 26, 2008 7:02 pm

Ippin Shtaka walked into the little ramen bar his silver hair flowing behind him and a blindfold around his eyes with somewhat a diamond skin starting from his left eye and going down. He wore all black clothes with a black shirt and a jacket all zipped and buttond up.

Unlike his appearance and what you would mostly think the man held a smile across his face as he enetered into his favorite resturant. The lady behind the counter looked at Ippin and smiled and asked "Hi Ippin. Now what would you like?" Ippin calmly and with a somewhat of a jolly tone "The usual if you would" and with a smile still across his face. He moved his head in the direction of the other man who was on the other side of the bar. He didnt care he waved to him and then waited for his ramen to show up.
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Post by Kyouken Uchiha Wed Nov 26, 2008 7:20 pm

Kudara see's the man wave at him. He lifts up his hand and waves back "Good afternoon" he said with a smile. He goes back to his onion's and leek ramen and slowly continues to eat it.
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Post by Kaji-Kanto Wed Nov 26, 2008 7:37 pm

Ippin returned the greeting and then undid his blind fold revealing eyes coated in diamond. He smirked when his order of ramen with onions and a egg on the side had arrived. He then turned to the man across the side of the bar and said "You might want to look away, as what you will see might disgust you slightly." Ippin then picked up the bowl and brought it near his face and then opened his mouth and let unroll a reptiallian sized toungue and lapped at the ramen picking up almost the entire bowls volume and gulping it down in a single lick of his toungue. He then placed the bowl back onto the counter and asked for another bowl.
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Post by Kyouken Uchiha Wed Nov 26, 2008 7:45 pm

Kudara's eyebrow raised underneath his blindfold. He realize that he's seen very odd and percuilar things in his lifetime and this is probably on his top ten list of very odd things. Kudara sips down the last of his ramen and looks over at him. He could tell that he was from another village, seeing the aura that radiated off of him was not from Konoha. Kudara leans his head back on the wall and begins to unfold his blindfold. He lets the blindfold drop to the table. His eye's were closed but slowly he opened them and looks at Ippin. The black universe like eye color contain many spec's of white, red, blue and other fantastic colors. It was though it was like looking at the sky at night time. In the middle of his eye's, there was a small, faint flame. It began to shine extremely bright, but only Ippin would notice the brightness. The flame begin's to surround him. Ippin begins to see the past, the present and then the future all at one time.
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Post by Kaji-Kanto Wed Nov 26, 2008 7:56 pm

Ippin looked at the man as he undid his blindfold then looked into the mans eyes that seemed to glow then...

Ippin was back with his father he was a little kid he saw his father and then instantly he was ripped away from ippin then he saw himself as he was now a Konoha ninja with a Suna ninja's background. He then saw into the future and even saw his own death...

That all happened within a matter of seconds and then ippins order had arrived and ippin fell off the stool and bringing the bowl with him in somewhat of a shocked look on his face but tears running down his face. He had no clue what happened but it truely saddened him.
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Post by Kyouken Uchiha Wed Nov 26, 2008 8:08 pm

Kudara puts his blindfold back around his eye's and sighes a breath of sadness. It had gotten extremely cold for a brief moment. He looks over at the man

"Ippin" he said calmly

It was impossible to know what Ippin name was unless he knew him by association or some form of it but Kudara said it as though he knew him for years. The soothing, relax voice that Kudara had could the most darkest and evilest of men. Kudara was not staring at him but it was like the feeling of being stared at.

"Do not be afraid my child, for your role in this will soon play an great affect upon your life"
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Post by Kaji-Kanto Wed Nov 26, 2008 8:24 pm

Ippin's eyes stopped tearing he regained his composure and sat back into his stool like nothing had happened. He then looked at the man who was sitting across from him and asked "What do you mean?"
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Post by Kyouken Uchiha Wed Nov 26, 2008 8:59 pm

Kudara was outside in an instant. He looks back and smiles at Ippin. "You will find out soon enough" His body began to fade away and then he disappeared into the wind
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Post by Kaji-Kanto Wed Nov 26, 2008 9:32 pm

Ippin was startled at the sudden vanishment of the man he smirked and turned around. He had no clue what had happened if he had made a freind or enemy all he knew whoever they were they were powerful. He put his head on the bar and thought he had no real memories of the future just images of wierd puppets. He was focused on these then inspiration struck and he got up placed his wallet onto the bar table and then ran off back to his house and began working.
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