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Post by WhiteBoy Sat Dec 06, 2008 4:33 pm

Spirit/Demon Name:Koori Ookami(iIce Wolf)

Gender:Male

Age Of Spirit:2,000 years old

Appearance:Koori Ookami(Ice Wolf) finshed now _polar11
Only the Controller of the spirit can see it.

Personality:very Strong and intimidating.

Skills/Abilitys:The user transforms into the beast.The person looks like a half man-half wolf.This beast was highly skilled in Ninjutsu so it allows the user to learn some jutsu that other people can't learn.(This can only happen at upper Chuunin or Jounin.You may you this at a lower rank,but only in a life or death experience.)

History:The koori Ookami was a beast that had attacked the WaterFall Village and The Leaf Village 2,000 years ago.This seal was transferred though out his family heritage.This beast was summoned from a Outlaw/Ex-kage of The WaterFall Village.To stop it from attacking the village,his great,great,great,great,great,great grand father had sealed it into his daughters body.The daughter learned to use the beast to help her and make her stronger.Before she died,she learned a jutsu which could transfer it to another,she did this so her family could use the beast to get stronger as she did.
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Seal Name:Ookami Seal

Rank:C-B(Depending on Ninja Rank)

Location:The shoulders of both arms.The seal looks like four thunder bolts in a forum of a cross.

Positive Effects:The user turns into a half-man and half-wolf.The user can learn some ninjutsu that other people can't learn and the user's chakra becomes 2 fold higher then the normal amount.

Negative Effects:The user's chakra gets cut down to pretty much nothing for the next 4 hours and every time the user use's the spirit,their life is shortened.

Transformation Effect:The user turns into a half-man and half-wolf with blue and white chakra blazing out of it.

Jutsu learned from the spirit:

Name:Blinding Streak
Range:Close
Type Of Jutsu:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Description:A lightning based ninjutsu created by WhiteFang, during his days as a young jounin in the WaterFall Village. The strategy behind this jutsu goes further than the usual lightning attacks. Taking advantage of the strong light emitted by the electric current, the attacker blinds the enemy, providing an excellent chance to attack.Then the User dashes in,while the User has a ball of lightning in their hand.
Weakness:Earth type Jutsu that can counter attack.

Name:Destruction Orb
Range:Close
Type Of Jutsu:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Description:The user creates a explosive orb made of your own chakra and blood.Then the user charges in for the attack.
Weakness:Earth type jutsu that can counter attack.

Name:Incessant Blizzard
Range:Far
Type Of Jutsu:Ninjutsu
Element:Ice
Description:The user slows down the enemy while inflicting considerable damage.The User concentrates ice element chakra in his hands. With incredible control,The user throws a constant barrage of ice and snow at the enemy.
Weakness:Fire jutsu that can either melt or counter attack the snow and ice.


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Post by Guest Sat Dec 06, 2008 6:15 pm

ok so if your not finished either put not finished or n/f in the title. thanks man

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Post by WhiteBoy Sat Dec 06, 2008 6:35 pm

Okay,i fixed it
do you like it so far?
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Post by Guest Sat Dec 06, 2008 7:19 pm

yes , its is good, but make sure its not too overpowering for a genin or it won't be approved.

I like it , just dont forget skills/abilities and history. History doesn't have to be really long, just a few lines, or more if you want.


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Post by WhiteBoy Sat Dec 06, 2008 7:25 pm

I know,but this demon is only going to be able to be unleashed sometimes.
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Post by Guest Sat Dec 06, 2008 7:28 pm

That's fine, if there's something I've learned, its adding in all the details.

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Post by WhiteBoy Sat Dec 06, 2008 7:45 pm

Thanks for the tip,Hey i'm stuck with coming up with ideas for history,could you help me?
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Post by Guest Sat Dec 06, 2008 10:03 pm

I'll see what I can do. If I think of anything I will send it too you.

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Post by WhiteBoy Sat Dec 06, 2008 10:34 pm

Okay thanks dude
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Post by Guest Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:09 am

your well on your way

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Post by Kenshi Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:16 am

This is approved under one condition, that you spar me, (i wont kill you) and you have to use everything you posted.

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Post by WhiteBoy Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:50 am

Thanks,is thier anything i need to add
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Post by Kenshi Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:33 pm

Nope, you are all set to go. Smile

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Post by WhiteBoy Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:35 pm

Yay,now thats 3 things i got approved without asking me to change Very Happy
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