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Post by WhiteBoy Sun Dec 07, 2008 1:58 am

Name:Blinding Streak
Rank:A-Rank
Range:Close
Type Of Jutsu:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Description:A lightning based ninjutsu created by WhiteFang, during his days as a young jounin in the WaterFall Village. The strategy behind this jutsu goes further than the usual lightning attacks. Taking advantage of the strong light emitted by the electric current, the attacker blinds the enemy, providing an excellent chance to attack.Then the User dashes in,while the User has a ball of lightning in their hand.
Weakness:Wind type Jutsu that can counter attack. Also, the chakra consumption is high and can't be over used.
Requirements:Must have the Koori Ookami(iIce Wolf) Spirit.

Name:Destruction Orb
Rank:A-Rank
Range:Close
Type Of Jutsu:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Description:The user concentrates a great deal of lightning chakra into an orb. The orb is Rasengan sized and the lightning focused in the orb statics and sparks, so the user must blood to cover the orb in his blood. When the Orb is covered in blood, it turns a crimison red and glows yellow underneath due to the activity of the lightning. This signifies that the jutsu is ready.
Weakness:Wind type jutsu that can counter attack, and it usually consumes nearly all your chakra. This jutsu doesn't last long once created, so the user must make several diversions if he wishes it to work.
Requirements:Must have the Koori Ookami(iIce Wolf) Spirit. Usually this jutsu can only be done when you are using the Ice Wolf Spirits chakra, and it is a trump card jutsu

Name:Incessant Blizzard
Rank: C
Range:Far
Type Of Jutsu:Ninjutsu
Element:Ice
Description: The user focuses ice element chakra into his hands and does a small string of handsigns. After the handsigns, The user slaps his palms together causing a blizzard to rain down. The snow from the blizzard harms the sight of the opponent and makes him travel a bit slower. If the opponent gets covered in snow, he will become completely immoblie.
Weakness:Fire jutsu that can either melt or counter attack the snow and ice.
Requirements:Must have the Koori Ookami(iIce Wolf) Spirit. Also it takes a somewhat large amount of chakra consumption.


Last edited by WhiteBoy on Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:22 pm; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : i wasn't done yet)
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Post by Guest Sun Dec 07, 2008 2:10 am

add ranks guestimate if you need to

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Post by WhiteBoy Sun Dec 07, 2008 2:13 am

Their i fixed,is it approved?
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Post by Guest Sun Dec 07, 2008 6:21 am

No Sorry.

You are only A genin and they seem way too powerful for a genin to use. At least I believe your character is only approved as a Genin. If so... then they need more weaknesses and they need to be a lower rank untill you work your way up to Jounin or whatever.

I'll check what rank you are.

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Post by WhiteBoy Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:10 pm

Yeah i know but if you read my history,He goes In to trainned at Jounin.I'm a genin but i have my his up to Jounin,i don't plan on using these in till i'm Jounin.Should i add a ninja rank that says Jounin?
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Post by Kenshi Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:18 pm

Name:Blinding Streak
Rank:A-Rank
Range:Close
Type Of Jutsu:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Description:A lightning based ninjutsu created by WhiteFang, during his days as a young jounin in the WaterFall Village. The strategy behind this jutsu goes further than the usual lightning attacks. Taking advantage of the strong light emitted by the electric current, the attacker blinds the enemy, providing an excellent chance to attack.Then the User dashes in,while the User has a ball of lightning in their hand.
Weakness:Wind type Jutsu that can counter attack. Also, the chakra consumption is high and can't be over used.
Requirements:Must have the Koori Ookami(iIce Wolf) Spirit.

Name:Destruction Orb
Rank:A-Rank
Range:Close
Type Of Jutsu:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Description:The user concentrates a great deal of lightning chakra into an orb. The orb is Rasengan sized and the lightning focused in the orb statics and sparks, so the user must blood to cover the orb in his blood. When the Orb is covered in blood, it turns a crimison red and glows yellow underneath due to the activity of the lightning. This signifies that the jutsu is ready.
Weakness:Wind type jutsu that can counter attack, and it usually consumes nearly all your chakra. This jutsu doesn't last long once created, so the user must make several diversions if he wishes it to work.
Requirements:Must have the Koori Ookami(iIce Wolf) Spirit. Usually this jutsu can only be done when you are using the Ice Wolf Spirits chakra, and it is a trump card jutsu

Name:Incessant Blizzard
Rank: C
Range:Far
Type Of Jutsu:Ninjutsu
Element:Ice
Description: The user focuses ice element chakra into his hands and does a small string of handsigns. After the handsigns, The user slaps his palms together causing a blizzard to rain down. The snow from the blizzard harms the sight of the opponent and makes him travel a bit slower. If the opponent gets covered in snow, he will become completely immoblie.
Weakness:Fire jutsu that can either melt or counter attack the snow and ice.
Requirements:Must have the Koori Ookami(iIce Wolf) Spirit. Also it takes a somewhat large amount of chakra consumption.

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Post by Kenshi Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:19 pm

I modified those jutsu above and I think they are good enough to get approved, just need to hear that from another admin before I approve it.

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Post by WhiteBoy Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:22 pm

Okay cool,i'll change them right away.
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Post by Kenshi Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:24 pm

For now since me and you need to fight so I can asses you, I'm going to approve it for now.

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Post by WhiteBoy Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:27 pm

Okay thanks,i guess i am really getting better Razz
So when do u wanna rp?
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Post by Kenshi Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:29 pm

Right now if you wish, make a topic in a village besides Konoha, and we can get started. This wont be an acutal "fight fight" kind of like an OOC fight. I need to be completing some things while I am doing this, and you can also do this fight and do some other RPing if you wish.

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Post by WhiteBoy Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:31 pm

Okay,so when are we,how are we and where at?
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Post by Kenshi Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:32 pm

Just post and fight me somewhere lol

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Post by WhiteBoy Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:34 pm

lol ok,but i don't know how i should start the fight?could you help me?please
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Post by Kenshi Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:38 pm

I dont know what your character name is but it could be like this.

Whiteboy was sitting out on the outskirts of the forest in the Waterfall village, and he was waiting on his opponent to arrive. He was thinking about blah blah blah......

Just make a post like that, write about what you are thinking about, and how the day is going for you. You always wanna kind of make your posts over two are three lines. Instead of a oneliner like

"Whiteboy was waiting for Yoshimo to show up and fight him"

One liners like that are lame and the the more you write about how you feel the better the post is.

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Post by Kaji-Kanto Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:44 pm

Here yah go yosh JUTSU APPROVED!!!!!!!!
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Post by WhiteBoy Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:45 pm

Yay thank you Smile Smile Smile
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Post by Kenshi Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:45 pm

No problem, it's my job.

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Post by WhiteBoy Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:46 pm

lol
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