Naku's Rp sample
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Naku''s Rp sample
Naku wakes up one morning impaled with a kuni in his arm and he lay there bleeding then he fling his hand over his body grabbing the kuni and pulled it out grunting as he got up thinking damn what happened to me Naku says as he sits up looking around. He stand up and then go to a neat by lake and wash out his arm of blood and then he get up and look around the wind blowing through his hair as he walks around grabbing his head trying to remember what happened to him. He kept remembering flashes of it then soon he put them together.
What Naku saw was him and a Akatsuki fighting and Naku was pissed off by the look of it and Naku was losing but he did a lot of damage to the enemy but in the end Naku got impaled with the kuni and then knocked out by the enemies knee. They both where hurt a-lot but Naku lost but Naku was left alive for some reason. He lived on and then tried to find the Akatsuki who had almost killed him. he got up panting then he coughed up blood but he was a day before his 30th birthday. Naku then woke up the net morning and he had fangs then his cloths started turning red and black and his whole body changed. Naku was Yelling loud from the pain he spun around and dropped on the floor. he stood up all his wounds healed. He was in so much pain he walked in to the leaf village hoping to die. 4 leaf jouning attacked him and there swords went through him but then Naku realized something. He looked down and it did not hurt him then he took all the swords out and then spun around with the swords in his hand beheading all of the ninjas. Naku then walked out of the village. He then traveled along through the woods with his new discovered powers. But he then found out another thing his aggression had gone greatly up and he wanted to see blood and he then even began biting people on the neck. Naku then killed more people getting more vicious each time.
What Naku saw was him and a Akatsuki fighting and Naku was pissed off by the look of it and Naku was losing but he did a lot of damage to the enemy but in the end Naku got impaled with the kuni and then knocked out by the enemies knee. They both where hurt a-lot but Naku lost but Naku was left alive for some reason. He lived on and then tried to find the Akatsuki who had almost killed him. he got up panting then he coughed up blood but he was a day before his 30th birthday. Naku then woke up the net morning and he had fangs then his cloths started turning red and black and his whole body changed. Naku was Yelling loud from the pain he spun around and dropped on the floor. he stood up all his wounds healed. He was in so much pain he walked in to the leaf village hoping to die. 4 leaf jouning attacked him and there swords went through him but then Naku realized something. He looked down and it did not hurt him then he took all the swords out and then spun around with the swords in his hand beheading all of the ninjas. Naku then walked out of the village. He then traveled along through the woods with his new discovered powers. But he then found out another thing his aggression had gone greatly up and he wanted to see blood and he then even began biting people on the neck. Naku then killed more people getting more vicious each time.
Last edited by Naku Exoma on Sun May 24, 2009 11:45 am; edited 1 time in total
Naku Exoma- Posts : 12
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Re: Naku's Rp sample
I'm sorry, I cannot allow you to be S-rank. Most of our S-ranks post much more than this. I'll give you C rank. Is that ok?
But, Seeing as your are missing nin, You must also get approved by Jin.
But, Seeing as your are missing nin, You must also get approved by Jin.
tradebuzzing2- Posts : 585
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Re: Naku's Rp sample
ill make it longer
Naku Exoma- Posts : 12
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Re: Naku's Rp sample
Considering that, I would not give you the S-rank title you wish to have. Im still going with C-ranked
Kyouken Uchiha- S-Ranked Missing-Nin
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Re: Naku's Rp sample
well at least a A ranked missing
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Re: Naku's Rp sample
I cannot allow any further than C, It won't talk long, for you to get A. If you improve, that is.
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Re: Naku's Rp sample
We arent trying to turn you down, we like our members to step up their game, if you know what I mean. At the moment, both myself and Diabloss33 can give you C-rank at the moment.
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