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Post by Ookami Tenma Wed Feb 04, 2009 9:20 am

Name:
Ookami Tenma

Age:
16

Bloodline:
N/A

Rank:
Genin

Classification: ?

Village:
Village hidden in the mist (Kirigakure)

Alignment:
Good but when made angry stops caring

Appearance:
Ookami Tenma (Edited for time skip) Seiyaku-1

Personality:
Ookami is a very social person who cares much for what happens in the world around him. He will always be seen with friends and teammates and seems never to be alone. The only thing that comes before his friends and teammates lives is the Mizukage’s safety and the safety of his village. His dream is to be a hidden mist black ops member, so then the Mizukage’s safety is his teams’ responsibility.

Ookami also has a very short temper that those who know him know to be on the right side of, and when he loses his temper that person is going to be made to suffer.

History:
Born in Kirigakure Ookami was a lively young boy with a bright future an average student at the academy. At the age of 10 his grades started slipping and he came home with unusual bruises. His concerned parents asked his teachers at the academy, nothing unusual there they ask his sensei if he would look into what was causing the bruises and he agreed. The sensei followed him home one night and found he was being bullied by some older kids at the academy.

The next day the sensei gave a talk about bullying and told the students that when confronted by a gang of bullies to always go for the biggest and loudest one. Then the gang would realize that you were not to be messed with. At the end of the lesson, the sensei told Ookami that anyone who makes you mad weren’t worth the soil they stood on.

The next night the sensei followed him home again, and again he found Ookami surrounded by bullies who were punching and kicking him. Just as the sensei was about to intervene, Ookami screamed loudly and punched the nearest bully in the face, then proceeded to attack the rest of the group and beat them to a pulp. Ookami then fell to his knees and passed out. When he awoke he was at the academy with his sensei sat next to him. His sensei asked, “Why did you attack them so mercilessly?” He simply answered, “They made me mad”, and then blacked out again. Within the next week he’d graduated.

After he graduated he held back from the Chuunin exams for two to three years so he could gain experience and train his body and mind to its maximum capacity. Now he believes that he is ready and will take anything the Chuunin exams have to throw at him!

Speciality:
Ninjutsu

Learned jutsus:
Basic Academy Jutsu

Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank - c
Character Use: Momochi Zabuza, Hatake Kakashi, Hoshigaki Kisame, etc.
Type - supplementary
Suiton (water) - Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however; it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

Mizurappa
Rank – c
Character Use: Yahiko
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Suiton (water) - Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja will expel a strong jet of water at the opponent.

Elements:
Dominant – Water
Recessive – Wind

Weapons/Items:
Ninja short sword named Shikon, senbon & all normal ninja weapons.

Goals:
To advance to the ranks of Hidden mist black ops.


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Post by Guest Wed Feb 04, 2009 10:03 am

In your learned jutsu sectionit says you have both water and wind jutsu. No. As a genin you can only use one element. Since Water is your dominant element, I would stick with water and cross out the wind. Fix this and it will be approved for everything else seems to be in order.

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Post by Kenshi Wed Feb 04, 2009 10:13 am

Yeah, with training you can unlock that recessive element.So just stickto the Suiton ones for now, and then as you get stronger you can have the recessive element.

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Post by Ookami Tenma Wed Feb 04, 2009 11:35 am

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Post by Kenshi Wed Feb 04, 2009 12:21 pm

Arigato!

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Post by Ookami Tenma Mon Mar 23, 2009 12:23 am

Ookami has spent the last year and a half training to unlock the eight gates. Also he has started to develop and new jutsu to be used in combination with the eight gates. under the watchful eye of his new sensei Lee, he has become faster and stronger. His strategy has also improved along with his taijutsu skills. Unfortunatly he has also picked up a bad habbit in the form of smoking, but he see's that as a minor setback. Since Lee started training him he also has come to terms with his memories of being bullied he now uses those memories as feul to help him open the first three gates.

Lee had taken Ookami to his friend Kazuki Yajin, who's recessive element was also wind (fuuton). After leaving Ookami at Kazuki's for three months, he had fluently learned three different techniques utilizing the wind element. Lee took him back, and then taught him to open the third gate over time.

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Post by Ookami Tenma Thu Mar 26, 2009 2:10 pm

Bump.

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Post by Guest Fri Mar 27, 2009 9:47 am

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