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Keiteki's Redemption Summonings (I lost mah Dark Dragons)

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Post by Uchiha Kumori Thu Mar 05, 2009 10:12 pm

Summoned Creature or Item: Begonin

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Description:
Begonin was one of the new Dragon Summonings that Keiteki was gifted with upon his redemption to the Drakun Clan. This summon has the ability to stretch his mouth open, and swallow any physical jutsu (ex: elemental) that goes inside. Begonin can't move while he is stretching open his mouth, and the extended mouth can only swallow a forward facing attack. However, no matter what the jutsu is, the attack will be nullified, no matter what it is. Even if it is non physical, Begonin will swallow it whole, and use it as nutrients for his physical self. This allows him to feed himself off of his opponent's attacks.

In addition, the fire that is expelled by Begonin takes on a green color. This green fire consumes oxygen at an extremely fast rate, and the waste products left behind make a smoke that is heavier than air is, and is extremely poisonous, making flaming attacks produce even huger smoke fields, which chokes and kills any life form in it's path.

Weakness:
The weakness to the first ability is that Begonin can not move while stretching his mouth to swallow attacks whole. In addition, he can only swallow attacks from the front. The weakness to the second ability is that since it is heavier than air, the fire that is spat out will not go through the air, but rather go in an arch.


Summoned Creature or Item: Kedamono

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Description:
Kedamono takes on the role of the previous summoning, Sanseki, in that he is able to go head to head with other summonings. Kedamono has a very high speed level, and is also full of high strength, even for a summoning, he is able to overtake and kill other summonings using physical force alone. Kedamono does have a particular technique that allows him to cut a swath of destruction. Kedamono will keep one foot straight, pointing down, as he is flying, and one curled up. On the oppposite hand away from the fully extended leg, the other hand is extended downwards, whiel the other hand is facing straight up. And after that pose is taking, while flying, he folds his wings, and creates a drill, sort of like the Inukaza clan's Fang over fang jutsu.

The fire that is used by Kedamono takes on the form of a sky blue color. It does not fire straight out, but rather acts like a flamethrower, only expelling fire at a set distance. However, the force at which is it expelled gives him the capacity to easily shatter boulders, and will make no exception for the skin or scales of an enemy summoning. However, it takes large amounts of chakra to muster this destructive fire.

Weakness:
Kedamono does not have good accuracy.


Summoned Creature or Item: Kami

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Description:
Kami the dragon has a distinct ability, in that he has able to create special spheres that act in a similar way to a vacuum, in that they suck up anything in reach. These spheres have the ability to suck in anything that weighs less than 250 pounds of total weight. When sucked in, they are trapped inside of the sphere, and crammed inside with whatever else the sphere sucks up. They will suck up things in a huge range, and will therefore sometimes crush whatever is inside. However, there are limits to the usage of these spheres. Each use of the sphere requires a 10 second recharge period in between throws. Also, the sphere dissipates whenever it hits a thick and solid enough surface, namely the ground. When released from Kami's hands, they dissipate after 15 seconds.

Kami can also release fireballs from his mouth. These fireballs are colored a deep, maroon color, and unlike the other fires, are shot in the form of fireballs, and can be shot in rapid and quick succession. This allows him to keep his enemies at bay, and inflict damage on foes, or set up for the next attack.

Weakness:
The vacuum spheres weakness is in the description. Kami is not physically strong.




Summoned Creature or Item: Saiboruchi

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Description:
Saiboruchi is Keiteki's personal summoning, being that the two share a partnership, with Saiboruchi being a young creature, he looks up to Keiteki for saving him, and therefore serves him with the utmost willingness, sometimes blindly so. When Saiboruchi was being rebuilt by Keiteki, Keiteki armed him with many different weapons, often armed before battle, in which Keiteki could have Saiboruchi deploy during battle. He is fast, powerful, and capable of holding it's own in battle.

Artilley on back
Fire bomb launchers on it's stomach.
Deployable, stretching main claw.
Various launchers
Various weapons inside

Weakness: It retains something of a “bond” with Keiteki, which can sometimes blind the creature. Seeing Keiteki get hurt may anger it, or otherwise, it is emotional. Also, Saiboruchi can be damaged by Suiton and Raiton fairly easy, compared to other attacks.

Artilley on back
Fire bomb launchers on it's stomach.
Deployable, stretching main claw.
Various launchers, which expel fire and missles
Various weapons inside


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Post by Mirage Thu Mar 05, 2009 10:37 pm

The first one needs to go. Being able to suck up and absorb ANY jutsu and then using it to gain power is a no. Just being abel to suck up ALL and ANY jutsu by itself is to much. I mean if it was just non-physical jutsu or physical jutsu then it would be ok. But being able to do it with all just won't work.
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Post by Uchiha Kumori Thu Mar 05, 2009 10:39 pm

Well, that's kind of what it does. It sucks up physical jutsu. Sorry for not including that D:
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Post by Kyo Thu Mar 05, 2009 11:30 pm

Mirage wanted me to post this.

"What i mean is it should be allowed to either suck up solid jutsu like rocks, water, metal and plants... OR.... non-physical things like lightning, fire, wind and sound.
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Post by Uchiha Kumori Fri Mar 06, 2009 7:34 am

Then I guess he sucks up non-physical things then.
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