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Post by Onkei Sat Jun 06, 2009 9:50 pm

Name: Makaze Onkei

Age: 15

Bloodline: Makaze((Wind Manipulation))

Rank: Genin
Classification: ???
Village: Sand
Alignment: Good

Appearance:
Traditional/Ceremonial
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Battle:
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Personality: Onkei is a regular shinobi. She isn't over confident, she's tactical, and she is loyal. Onkei would gladly die for any village member of clan mate. She is a simple girl, who likes simple things. While she is very smart, and is able to understand nearly everything that is explained to her, she prefers to keep things as simple and straight-forward as possible. At times she is very impulsive, though she is never impulsive in combat. She loves doing nothing as much as she loves fighting, and is often caught just staring into space. Onkei is very absorbed in her own thought process, and tends to block out others when she is thinking. This makes her a pour leader, but a great strategist; she is able to come up with a plan in the most heated battles, but she would never be able to take suggestions and work with others in the way a leader should be able to. Onkei prefers mid-ranged combat, as she doesn't like seeing the expression of the dying opponent.

History:

Speciality:
Learned jutsus:
Fuuton, "Senpuku Kata"
Elements: Fuuton
Weapons/items:
Silver Slasher: A wind styles offensive weapon which allows you to channel chakra into the blades to add destructive force, may be thrown or held for close combat.
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Goals:
To serve her country and live up to her parent's expectations.


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Post by Onkei Sat Jun 06, 2009 10:08 pm

History:

Birth&Academy Arc:
Onkei was born June 11th, at noon. There were no complications, and she came out a normal crying baby. After a few weeks in the hospital Onkei was brought home to the clan. She grew up healthy and strong, and was a tomboy from the start. Even as a young'un she preferred playing with the boys and pretending to be a ninja. She would be the best at catching the other team, always having pinpoint accuracy with the fake shuriken. After a few years of hanging out and making friends, she was placed in the Academy. Excited but nervous, she walked to school the first day with a group of her friends that would be joining her. She felt safe with them, but that wouldn't last for long. They were split into two different classes, her group halved. She was placed with a bunch of kids she didn't know, and only a few that she did know. Even then, the few that she did know wouldn't take kunoichi courses with her, so she was alone there. Onkei tried to make friends with the girls, but they didn't like her too much. After years of this she passed the exam and became an eager and excited genin.

Genin Arc:
Onkei took some time off of being a ninja so that she could train with her mother. Her mother taught her to fight with the clan weapons, and taught her how to utilize the clan's Makaze techniques. Onkei mastered them quickly, but still she did not return to genin-ship. Instead she took a lot of time developing her own techniques using her clan's wind style. She called them "Ambush Style", named after their general tactic for blinding the enemy and then massacring them with some offensive attack. When she was satisfied with this, she returned to the Kazekage's office to announce that she would join up as a genin once again. Just in time for the chuunin exams.

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Post by Kenshi Sat Jun 06, 2009 10:32 pm

Approved.

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Post by Kaji-Kanto Sun Jun 07, 2009 12:01 am

*claps* This is very nice compared to most subbmissions we have gotten recently. However i have one thing i would like to ask that does not affect your approval if you could be so kind to fix that image in the second spoiler. You seem to have forgotten to get the direct link instead you got the media photobucket link.
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Post by Onkei Sun Jun 07, 2009 9:24 pm

Fixed ^.^

Thanks for pointing that out

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