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Post by Chitona Sat Apr 11, 2009 5:08 pm

u]Name:[/u] Naijunai Chitona

Age: 16

Bloodline: -

Rank: Genin
Classification:
Village: Sunagakure
Alignment: Villages

Appearance: 5'7, long brown hair, Pure white eyes, Beige T-Shirt, black shorts, bandaged legs and right arm, Large Sand-colored cape that covers his whole body, and black boots.

Personality: Naive, shy.

History: One of the direct descendent of Hirukitav, he is a young learner, beaming with speed and power. He is one of the smartest in his clan, with an IQ of over 250. At the age of five, he Told his father the whole story of how they came to be, passed down through a small book. He hopes now, as a genin, to find a team that can work together.
He one day may choose to be a Kazekage of the village, but he doubts that dream of his. His family has on last peice of the clan founder, His earth staff, and Giant fan. The fan was entrusted with Naijunai, as he one day might be the new clan leader. Losing can't bother him, he'll just train harder for a rematch. His younger sister, whom he loves, promised her to help her become a good ninja. He made is sister a stuffed racoon doll when they were younger, and she still has it, and they still love each other. He helped her train, because their parents had allowed him to do so, on one condition, he must protect her at all costs, even if it meant she must forfiet a match, which she'd be unhappy for a while.

Speciality: Taijustu
Learned jutsus: Wind scythe jutsu, Wind style - air wall.
Elements: Air
Weapons/items: Shurikens, sometimes a giant fan.
Goals: To be the best ninja he can be, and overcome his shyness.


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Post by tradebuzzing2 Sat Apr 11, 2009 9:21 pm

You need more history for a Genin. and what's the Suno Village?

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Post by Shin Uchiha Sat Apr 11, 2009 10:09 pm

Suno is the Sand village, Tardo. I cant believe you didnt know that and you're the KazeKage!
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Post by Kenshi Sat Apr 11, 2009 10:28 pm

Its SU NA not Suno

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Post by tradebuzzing2 Sat Apr 11, 2009 10:38 pm

Shin Uchiha wrote:Suno is the Sand village, Tardo. I cant believe you didnt know that and you're the KazeKage!

1. I'm not Kazekage

2. if you read his clan history, it says new village, so you can't assume that.

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Post by Aki Sat Apr 11, 2009 11:06 pm

He studied Jutsu from the Huyga clan, but hasn't been able to use any yet. He hopes he can use the 8 palm rotation by the time the Chunin exams come by.

8 palm rotation belongs solely with the Hyuuga Clan, it is more or less of a kekkei genkai technique as it requires the Byakugan to perform, and only the Hyuuga have the Byakugan.

Please fix that or explain as to how he may have the opportunity to utilize the Hyuuga Clan's kekkei genkai.
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Post by Shin Uchiha Sat Apr 11, 2009 11:24 pm

Its SU NA not Suno


Ohhh.... Nevermind then
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Post by Chitona Sun Apr 12, 2009 10:49 am

Any thing else I need to add?
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Post by Aki Sun Apr 12, 2009 11:18 am

He one day may choose to be a Hokage of a village

Hokage is only in Konohagakure no Sato, the Kazekage rules over Sunagakure no Sato. If you mean your character aspires to be the leader of Sunagakure, then change it to Kazekage. Or, if you meant you just want your character to rule over one of the five great villages, then change it to Kage.
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Post by Chitona Sun Apr 12, 2009 11:34 am

ok I changed it...
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Post by Chitona Sun Apr 19, 2009 7:27 am

*Bump*
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Post by Chitona Thu Apr 23, 2009 8:29 pm

*bump*
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Post by Kyouken Uchiha Thu Apr 23, 2009 11:07 pm

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