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Post by razor_shinobi Sun Mar 08, 2009 3:02 am

Name: Razor Akatakai

Age: 13

Bloodline: Akatakai (will give link once approved)

Rank: Gennin
Classification: B rank
Village: Iwagakure
Alignment: neutral

Appearance: Razor Akatakai 23446660_After_the_rain___Suigetsu_by_Regi_c

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Personality: Razor is very normal in a way. he laughs and loves but also hates and kills. Razor has a very eager killing instinct which causes much hatred towards him within his village. he is much hated but also loved by his fellow comrades and teachers. he has a gentle heart but fierce in combat. in battle, Razor fights head-strong and cocky but also planning and cautious when an opponent is too strong or a high threat. he is very skilled with ninjutsu and taijutsu and is a master at weaponry arts with weapons such as his infamous kamisori, or Razor sword.

History: Evare was born an orphan within Iwagakure, the village hidden in the stone. he was a very outgoing young boy and loved to play but most parents refused to let their kids play with a fiend like Razor. Why you ask? because Razor has an ancient demon sealed within him. this demon strangely gave him no bursts of anything, but deep inside, during harsh combat, a ravaging killing instinct awakens within his soul and he can't be controlled, he is a true demon.

Evare entered the academy at age 7 as a weapon for the great village, he was going to be used as the villages secret weapon, a killing monster. Evare sped through all of his academy classes with perfect grades. he was a true genius indeed. the elders of the village despised him for the demon within him, but not only was he an outcast for this but his clan, Akatakai, was a hated clan for their practices and kekkie gankai. Evare dosent know his other clan mates for none live together. each clan mate lives separately with no contact what so ever. Evare graduated the academy at age 8.

Evare was put in a cell with all genius students in the cell. this was a secret squad assembled by the kage of the village to take threats, plan outmost dangerous plans and complete them without a fluke, protect the village in ways no normal shinobi could, and become the greatest shinobi of the village. this team was called team "dawn". the council of iwagakure had high expectations for this cell untill one day, the cell came across an outmost dangerous criminal and all died except Razor. in the end of this fight Razor's demon awoke to its full killing power and Razor slaughtered the criminal to shreds. Evare is now 13 and still a gennin for the council of the village keeps him at a low rank for one reason, to trick and deceive opponents into thinking he is a weak shinobi untill they find out his true power.


Speciality: ninjustu
Learned jutsus: spiked sphere jutsu
Elements: Earth, Water
Weapons/items: Kamisori

Razor Akatakai First_Tsurugi___Sword_1_and_2_by_mogcaiz
Goals: to become the Kage of Iwagakure


Last edited by razor_shinobi on Sun Mar 08, 2009 2:19 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Post by Shin Uchiha Sun Mar 08, 2009 11:55 am

One problem. You put "Iwagakure" for Alignment. Alignment means good, evil, or neutral. Fix that Razz
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Post by razor_shinobi Sun Mar 08, 2009 2:19 pm

ok edited XD
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