Keitaro Onibi n/f
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Keitaro Onibi n/f
by Shini Mon Dec 08, 2008 2:40 am
Name: Keitaro Onibi
Age: Appears to be 27, real age is 106
Rank: Kage leveled
Village: Otogakure
Appearance:
History: Onibi Keitaro was a highly educated, respected medical scientist and surgeon, and was on his way to developing vaccines for the diseases spreading rampantly throughout the ninja region. There was his unfortunate night however, when he fell to a horrid illness that slowly deteriorated his inner tissues and organs. Also, from his handicap, he was expelled from his occupation by the higher officials of science. The grief nearly killed him.
In order to keep his life, Keitaro gave his closest comrade, Zannen (who was a great surgeon/pathologist himself), all he knew and discovered throughout his extensive research, hoping that after his teachings, his friend would be suited to perform an operation he had been concocting for years. A surgical procedure that could quarantine an illness, and at the same time improve mental and physical attributes.
The operation was carried out during a state of unconsciousness. Alas, the longer the surgery carried on, the more his comrade came to realize his master would not survive. With regret, but determination, Zannen steered off course of Onibi's instructions and acted on a personal plan of his. An idea that would transform Keitaro's dying heart into wind-up apparatus, so he would not lose his life. It was performed and combined with Onibi's original wishes and by a streak of luck, it worked, but there was a huge drawback that was never foreseen. Keitaro had lost all of his memoirs, with the exception of his name. An addition was the awkward balance and movement he had acquired. But of course, the disease was quarantined, but not removed.
In order to conceal the grieving news he had endured before his amnesia, Zannen kept Keitaro's past life undisclosed. Even though he was physically capable of continuing his research, his knowledge was washed away. He would be unable to handle his past occupation. It was no good to refresh his memory on the grim subject, so his previous life was left unrepeated.
Not too long after, Keitaro had adapted to his surroundings and was soon fascinated by the style of the ninja. With his ';physical upgrade' from the surgery, he was indeed suited for becoming a Shinobi. An ability he had gained was the ability to stop his life for the sake of recon missions, then come back to life. With a windup mechanism replacing his heart, he is able to time the length of his death. Automatically his heart can begin ticking again, depending on the setting (think of the Nazi assassin in Hellboy). However, this device is in every way as essential to his survival as a normal being's heart. If it's destroyed, he will surely die. Nevertheless, it is one of Keitaro's most remarkable upgrades granted to him by his comrade. Also achieved was extreme flexibility.
Zannen encouraged Onibi's change of heart, secretly hoping his new path would serve just as fruitfully as his earlier profession.
Yet, only two years after the operation, Keitaro had sudden heart attack while Zannen was away from home. Instantly dying from the heart attack, Onibi laid on the floor dead for 3 days until his eyes once again opened. It suddenly came apparent that Keitaro could not die from heart failure, and that the attack much rather caused an opposite effect. In a sudden surge as he awoke from the dead, Keitaro had regained ever bit of his lost memory.
Pained and being felt betrayed by Zannen for keeping his memory away from himself, Keitaro waited. On the night of Zannen's return, without warning Onibi slaughter him, making him look not even human. With his medical genius restored though, Keitaro did not let the body go to waste. Preforming surgery, Onibi recreated Zannen as Kroenen, replacing his old heart with one simulator to his own. Toying with the brain, Keitaro made Zannen into a new person, with no past life and no knowledge of any kind. Still, it only toke another surgery to craft a large amount of knowledge back into Kroenen's head.
Still Onibi was not done, and with being able to function is body correctly now, he began to research once again. Kroenen, who had been implanted only the same amount of knowledge as Keitaro possessed with medical techniques, assisted in the lab. With the ability to not need to sleep, Keitaro spent months of non stop work into creating his greatest invention. Living technology. Functioning and appearing like the normal humans body, yet with much greater power.
Without any delay in time, Keitaro went under surgery by Kroenen. It lasted more then a week but when it was finished, Keitaro was a new man. More then less of his body was now the living technology, mainly his flesh and some organs.
Personality: Keitaro has always been a little eccentric towards other people, especially strangers. He enjoys ‘grossing out’ and unsettling other people, or so it seems. Most of the time this looks rather unintentional.
His strange obsession for surgery has turned his body from the neck down into a mangled, armored nightmare, which really disturbs others around him, though he never seems to mind.
Adding to his strange personality, he tends to move in strange ways, seemingly uncoordinated and physically challenged (resembles Jack Sparrow in a way). Yet, when in battle he's unbelievably amble and smooth.
Keitaro is also known for his altruistic nature; he often puts himself in harm's way to save other people, even his enemies at times.
To his opponents, Onibi merely seems like a drunken idiot (though he’s not drunk, mind you) and is not worth bothering. It’s only when they antagonize others is when Keitaro decides to step up and deal with the disturbance. That is possibly the only time he is drawn into scuffles, unless he angers someone. Onibi's gestures are believed to be a ploy to help keep his enemies off-guard, and it undeniably works.
His speech tends to be sharp, soft and rapid. Sometimes his train of thought goes awry and begins speaking of other things. All in all he is clever in words and is almost always right when arguing with others. He finds the loopholes in everything and uses them to his advantage. This trait often angers others, perhaps attracting more danger than normal.
All in all, Keitaro Onibi is a creative, frivolous individual who likes to work close with his comrades… too close at times.
Learned jutsu: Will post in different thread
Age: Appears to be 27, real age is 106
Rank: Kage leveled
Village: Otogakure
Appearance:
History: Onibi Keitaro was a highly educated, respected medical scientist and surgeon, and was on his way to developing vaccines for the diseases spreading rampantly throughout the ninja region. There was his unfortunate night however, when he fell to a horrid illness that slowly deteriorated his inner tissues and organs. Also, from his handicap, he was expelled from his occupation by the higher officials of science. The grief nearly killed him.
In order to keep his life, Keitaro gave his closest comrade, Zannen (who was a great surgeon/pathologist himself), all he knew and discovered throughout his extensive research, hoping that after his teachings, his friend would be suited to perform an operation he had been concocting for years. A surgical procedure that could quarantine an illness, and at the same time improve mental and physical attributes.
The operation was carried out during a state of unconsciousness. Alas, the longer the surgery carried on, the more his comrade came to realize his master would not survive. With regret, but determination, Zannen steered off course of Onibi's instructions and acted on a personal plan of his. An idea that would transform Keitaro's dying heart into wind-up apparatus, so he would not lose his life. It was performed and combined with Onibi's original wishes and by a streak of luck, it worked, but there was a huge drawback that was never foreseen. Keitaro had lost all of his memoirs, with the exception of his name. An addition was the awkward balance and movement he had acquired. But of course, the disease was quarantined, but not removed.
In order to conceal the grieving news he had endured before his amnesia, Zannen kept Keitaro's past life undisclosed. Even though he was physically capable of continuing his research, his knowledge was washed away. He would be unable to handle his past occupation. It was no good to refresh his memory on the grim subject, so his previous life was left unrepeated.
Not too long after, Keitaro had adapted to his surroundings and was soon fascinated by the style of the ninja. With his ';physical upgrade' from the surgery, he was indeed suited for becoming a Shinobi. An ability he had gained was the ability to stop his life for the sake of recon missions, then come back to life. With a windup mechanism replacing his heart, he is able to time the length of his death. Automatically his heart can begin ticking again, depending on the setting (think of the Nazi assassin in Hellboy). However, this device is in every way as essential to his survival as a normal being's heart. If it's destroyed, he will surely die. Nevertheless, it is one of Keitaro's most remarkable upgrades granted to him by his comrade. Also achieved was extreme flexibility.
Zannen encouraged Onibi's change of heart, secretly hoping his new path would serve just as fruitfully as his earlier profession.
Yet, only two years after the operation, Keitaro had sudden heart attack while Zannen was away from home. Instantly dying from the heart attack, Onibi laid on the floor dead for 3 days until his eyes once again opened. It suddenly came apparent that Keitaro could not die from heart failure, and that the attack much rather caused an opposite effect. In a sudden surge as he awoke from the dead, Keitaro had regained ever bit of his lost memory.
Pained and being felt betrayed by Zannen for keeping his memory away from himself, Keitaro waited. On the night of Zannen's return, without warning Onibi slaughter him, making him look not even human. With his medical genius restored though, Keitaro did not let the body go to waste. Preforming surgery, Onibi recreated Zannen as Kroenen, replacing his old heart with one simulator to his own. Toying with the brain, Keitaro made Zannen into a new person, with no past life and no knowledge of any kind. Still, it only toke another surgery to craft a large amount of knowledge back into Kroenen's head.
Still Onibi was not done, and with being able to function is body correctly now, he began to research once again. Kroenen, who had been implanted only the same amount of knowledge as Keitaro possessed with medical techniques, assisted in the lab. With the ability to not need to sleep, Keitaro spent months of non stop work into creating his greatest invention. Living technology. Functioning and appearing like the normal humans body, yet with much greater power.
Without any delay in time, Keitaro went under surgery by Kroenen. It lasted more then a week but when it was finished, Keitaro was a new man. More then less of his body was now the living technology, mainly his flesh and some organs.
Personality: Keitaro has always been a little eccentric towards other people, especially strangers. He enjoys ‘grossing out’ and unsettling other people, or so it seems. Most of the time this looks rather unintentional.
His strange obsession for surgery has turned his body from the neck down into a mangled, armored nightmare, which really disturbs others around him, though he never seems to mind.
Adding to his strange personality, he tends to move in strange ways, seemingly uncoordinated and physically challenged (resembles Jack Sparrow in a way). Yet, when in battle he's unbelievably amble and smooth.
Keitaro is also known for his altruistic nature; he often puts himself in harm's way to save other people, even his enemies at times.
To his opponents, Onibi merely seems like a drunken idiot (though he’s not drunk, mind you) and is not worth bothering. It’s only when they antagonize others is when Keitaro decides to step up and deal with the disturbance. That is possibly the only time he is drawn into scuffles, unless he angers someone. Onibi's gestures are believed to be a ploy to help keep his enemies off-guard, and it undeniably works.
His speech tends to be sharp, soft and rapid. Sometimes his train of thought goes awry and begins speaking of other things. All in all he is clever in words and is almost always right when arguing with others. He finds the loopholes in everything and uses them to his advantage. This trait often angers others, perhaps attracting more danger than normal.
All in all, Keitaro Onibi is a creative, frivolous individual who likes to work close with his comrades… too close at times.
Learned jutsu: Will post in different thread
Last edited by Shini on Mon Dec 08, 2008 7:42 am; edited 7 times in total
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Re: Keitaro Onibi n/f
by Guest Mon Dec 08, 2008 3:08 am
I genuinely like this Shini. Especially the look of Keitaro.
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Re: Keitaro Onibi n/f
by Shini Tue Jan 20, 2009 12:45 am
Can he be approved in advance. I cant really finish his history until i do kankaru's. I need him for some story lines.
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