Shinimori's Jutsu

[Chimera]

Name of jutsu:Lightning Explosion
Rank E-S: B
Range:Far
Type of jutsu:Nin
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity:Raiton


Description:The user does a series of hand signs, then lifts there hand in the air, their hand fills with a large amount of chakra that turns into lightning, it charges very quickly and becomes very big. The big ball explodes covering a very large area, its like a normal explosion but is filed with lightning.

Weakness: The explosion can also effect the user chances are 80 percent that they will get hit

Name of jutsu:Lightning Dance
Rank E-S:C
Range:Short
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity:Raiton


Description:The user brigns lightning chakra to their feet, and starts with the combat. The user sends shocking kicks at the user, a hit could paralyze the user for few seconds. The chakra is not yet strong enough to puncture the skin. When the user hits them, they send the lightning through their body, and any water jutsu you amplify the attack greatly.

Weakness:IF used to long the lightning will travel through the body, having a killing affect.

Name of jutsu:Lightning Dance 2
Rank E-S:B
Range:short
Type of jutsu:Nin/Tai
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity:Raiton


Description:After the user has used the first dance, they can activate the second one. The form lightning at their hands and feet. The chakra is much strogner than in the first dance and is able to punture the skin. The user can discharge the lightning into the target, and will ahve a much more effect like organ failure.

Weakness:If it is used to long the lightning will go through the users body, and will ahve a killing affect.

[Chimera]

Bump.... At the moment nothing I am making is beign approved, like from a few days ago

[Chimera]

OMG Seriously bump!

[Chimera]

Again, my stuff is ignored.. so bump

[Chimera]

BUMP!!!

[Guest]

EDIT: removed reason: seems to be annoying a certain someone

[Guest]

Ok... well...

I am going to make an assumption that your character is a Genin, since i cannot find the character creation thread for this character.


Lightning Explosion and Lightning Dance 2 seem ok to me so i'm only going to approve those 2.

As for Lightning Storm, Lightning Dance and Lightning Dance 3 well, no.

Lightning Storm seems quite powerful from what I am reading and there are not enough weaknesses.

Name of jutsu:Lightning Storm
Rank E-S:B
Range: Far
Type of jutsu: Ninjutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity: Raiton


Description:The user does hand signsthen lifts their hand up and a soht of lightning shoots in the sky, then later the storm starts. Lightning will shoot in many different places in a large area. ONce the lightning bolt has been launched in the sky lots of chakra is used but thats all the chakra needed. The lightning bolt infects the clouds with some sort of static things that amkes them go crazy with lightning. The storm last as long as it can.

Weakness: No one is safe in the storm.

The weakness is just not enough. I'm sorry but for a genin i believe you are going to need a few more weaknesses for this move.

Lightning Dance needs weaknesses added to it.

As for Lightning Dance 3.. well I think it may be a bit OP.

Name of jutsu:Lightning Dance 3
Rank E-S:A
Range:Far
Type of jutsu:Nin/Tai
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity:Raiton


Description:The same thing happens in the second one, eccept much stronger and uses much more chakra. This one can literaly kill someone with two strikes. The user is able to shoot lightning bolts freely fro mtheir hands and feet, giving them a deadly stirke.

Weakness:Uses loads of chakra.

First off... for a genin to be able to use such a high powered attack, there would need to be a LOT more weaknesses. 1 weakness just isn't enough. Also i don't believe a genin would be able to use an attack to this extent either. Being able to *literally* kill someone in two strikes would be a bit OP unless you had a decent amount of weaknesses. This one needs to be adjusted accordingly.

[Shin Uchiha]

Yeah, for a genin, those are pretty powerful and OP jutsu. If you used them in a RP, people would totally complain and say you are God Modding :/

[Chimera]

Okies done

[Guest]

Have you even read what I posted... *sigh*

Ligtning Storm needs more weaknesses. Add a few more. In such a case... 1 weakness is not enough. I shall have a look again after you have adjusted even more.

[Chimera]

Ooopsy I ment to delete that one

[Guest]

Well all seems ok to me now. Thanks Rtusubo

Approved

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