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Post by Cepeda Hyuuga Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:22 pm

Name: Cepeda Hyuuga

Age:14
Rank:Chunin

Village:Sand

Appearance: (A description of yourself or a picture) Avi

Personality: A Serouis kid who doesnt talk much just takes action and protects his friends and family with all he gots

History: :A kid who grew up with his little brother by his side while there parents were killed by some strange man with a scar on his eye and a Tatto on his Forehead.Ive grew up Training my Hyuuga techinques to find the man and kill him. I have a couple clues such as he is a Assissan, he wears a black robe, and also he is able to control fire.
We were Adopted by a family who abused us. They made us clean,cook and do everything for them. One day My Foster Father Slap me and i hit him back with a Fist right to the Stomach. I was sent to jail for assualt and my bro broke me out. So we eventaully became loners for life
We settled in a abanoned Warehouse and worked at a Ramen Shop. We bought everything for are own selves. Because of the pain we felt im gonaa destroy that man.


Learned jutsus: Byakugan, 8 Trigrams 64 Palms, Lighting Style:Lighting Bolt

Weapons/items: A G Blade with 2 sharp ends at the end of it and its shaped like a regular blade

Goals:To Kill my Parents Murderer and to be the Strongest Hyuuga ever


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Post by Shin Uchiha Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:26 pm

If this is done...

1. Make a longer History (like 10 or 8 more paragraphs)
2. Too young to be a Jounin
3. Put the picture where it says "Appearance"
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If its not done...
number 1, 2, 3, and
4. Please put "N/F or Not Done" on the topics name so we know.
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Post by Cepeda Hyuuga Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:33 pm

Cepeda Botashi Punk_guyHere My Apperance

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Post by Shin Uchiha Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:36 pm

okay, edit it and put it on the first post.

now numbers 1, 3, and 4
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Post by L Sun Nov 30, 2008 3:02 pm

Well actually for chunin it's 7-8 pharagraphes
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