Phoenix Ondan
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Phoenix Ondan
by Yousei Mon May 11, 2009 12:41 pm
Name of Demon/Spirit: Ondan (warmth)
Gender of the Demon/Spirit: male
Age of the Demon Spirit: young for his race, old for humans.
Appearance: ondan is young phoenix, it looks like human size flaming bird. Noone can see it as long as it's sealed inside my character.
My character cant see him too, but he can hear him in his mind.
Personality: kind, calm, cheerful.
Skills/Abilities: in times of need he would give my character fire natured chakra to use fire element (not yet, Yousei is Genin and can only use 1 element).
Also can regenerate characters minor (any simple) and major (vital or something more complex than minor) wounds by burning them. Cant regenerate bigger bodyparts like arm, or leg. Cant regenerate more than 3 organs at once. Also, for vital organs like heart, lungs, or some part of nerve system, when these are damaged, they must me regenerated at once otherwise it would be too late and my character would die. Normally Ondan saves energy for himself and doesnt regenerate Yousei every time he gets any injury, but if his life is in danger or situation demands quick healing, he can do it.
History: He doesnt remember his parents. He was cought by strange ninjas that used powerful sealing techniques to steal his chakra and his inner energy he uses for "rebirth" (when phoenix burns and rises from his ashes).
That drain took long and almost killed him; he managed to escape when an incident accured in their base.
He flew from island he was kept in; he was so scared that didnt even think about where he's flying.
After few hours of flying he fell unconscious because of drain took most of his chakra.
Yousei Fuusoku found him during training in Fuusoku family garden outside mansion.
Ondan was too weak to defend himself. He had too much of his energy stolen, so he couldnt perform "rebirth" to restore his chakra.
For so much energy to fully regenerate would take over hundred years.
Since Ondan saw that little Yousei had bloodline able to defend him, he asked to let him seal himself inside boys body.
They made a deal: Yousei would give him his body as shelter and half of his chakra to restore energy;
Ondan would give him his chakra to defend himself, also, after a a year or so, he could heal boys minor injuries with his "rebirth".
Only those two knew about this deal and Yousei kept it a secret.
Gender of the Demon/Spirit: male
Age of the Demon Spirit: young for his race, old for humans.
Appearance: ondan is young phoenix, it looks like human size flaming bird. Noone can see it as long as it's sealed inside my character.
My character cant see him too, but he can hear him in his mind.
Personality: kind, calm, cheerful.
Skills/Abilities: in times of need he would give my character fire natured chakra to use fire element (not yet, Yousei is Genin and can only use 1 element).
Also can regenerate characters minor (any simple) and major (vital or something more complex than minor) wounds by burning them. Cant regenerate bigger bodyparts like arm, or leg. Cant regenerate more than 3 organs at once. Also, for vital organs like heart, lungs, or some part of nerve system, when these are damaged, they must me regenerated at once otherwise it would be too late and my character would die. Normally Ondan saves energy for himself and doesnt regenerate Yousei every time he gets any injury, but if his life is in danger or situation demands quick healing, he can do it.
History: He doesnt remember his parents. He was cought by strange ninjas that used powerful sealing techniques to steal his chakra and his inner energy he uses for "rebirth" (when phoenix burns and rises from his ashes).
That drain took long and almost killed him; he managed to escape when an incident accured in their base.
He flew from island he was kept in; he was so scared that didnt even think about where he's flying.
After few hours of flying he fell unconscious because of drain took most of his chakra.
Yousei Fuusoku found him during training in Fuusoku family garden outside mansion.
Ondan was too weak to defend himself. He had too much of his energy stolen, so he couldnt perform "rebirth" to restore his chakra.
For so much energy to fully regenerate would take over hundred years.
Since Ondan saw that little Yousei had bloodline able to defend him, he asked to let him seal himself inside boys body.
They made a deal: Yousei would give him his body as shelter and half of his chakra to restore energy;
Ondan would give him his chakra to defend himself, also, after a a year or so, he could heal boys minor injuries with his "rebirth".
Only those two knew about this deal and Yousei kept it a secret.
Last edited by Yousei on Fri May 29, 2009 9:23 am; edited 2 times in total
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Re: Phoenix Ondan
by Aki Tue May 26, 2009 5:42 pm
... Please explain in detail as to what exactly he can heal and can not heal since you put "minor and major" clear that up. And no offense, but I think with everything your character has... it seems a little overpowered considering he's still just a Genin...
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Re: Phoenix Ondan
by Kenshi Sun May 31, 2009 8:16 am
You seem fine.
Also when will you be using more than one element?
At Chuunin/Jounin?
Also what type of power boost are we talking here? How many posts?
Also when will you be using more than one element?
At Chuunin/Jounin?
Also what type of power boost are we talking here? How many posts?
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Re: Phoenix Ondan
by Yousei Sun May 31, 2009 10:15 am
Yes, im going to make Yousei learn how to control phoenix chakra when he's chuunin. As for power boost... if you mean fire nature chakra, then it simply allows my character to use fire jutsu for 3 post with 3 post cooldown.
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