Saruwatari's jutsu

[freakyboyblu]

Name of jutsu: Mole Hiding technique
Rank E-S: C
Range: none
Type of jutsu: Ninjutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity: (Katon, Fuuton, Raiton, Suiton and Doton)
doton
Description: User Hides in ground to avoid attacks or supprise opponent

Weakness:



Name of jutsu: Groundhog Decapitation Technique
Rank E-S: D
Range: Close
Type of jutsu: Ninjutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity: (Katon, Fuuton, Raiton, Suiton and Doton)
doton

Description: User hides in ground, and when the chance is right they reach up to pull opponent into ground, immobilizing them.

Weakness: Easy to dodge, Heave chance to miss


Name of jutsu: Stone Lodging Destruction
Rank E-S: C
Range: All
Type of jutsu: Ninjutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity: (Katon, Fuuton, Raiton, Suiton and Doton)
Doton

Description: The opponent can control loose rocks around them to throw at opponent

Weakness: Possible to get hit by rocks in crossfire, can only be used effectively in rocky areas (Caves, Canyons, backed against the side of cliffs).


Name of jutsu: Rakagon -Lightning current Jutsu
Rank E-S: C
Range: all
Type of jutsu: Ninjutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity: (Katon, Fuuton, Raiton, Suiton and Doton)
Raiton

Description: When close combat fighting the user can shoot an electric current through opponents body. Also, Electrical current is shot through metal wire, stunning or injuring opponent depending on voltage

Weakness: Cannot use as genin, higher voltage requires more chakra


Name of jutsu: Rakagon -Lightning strike Jutsu
Rank E-S: C
Range: Mid Far
Type of jutsu: Ninjutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity: (Katon, Fuuton, Raiton, Suiton and Doton)
Raiton

Description: Electrical current is shot through metal wire, stunning or injuring opponent depending on voltage

Weakness: Cannot use as genin, higher voltage requires more chakra


Name of jutsu: Earth Clone
Rank E-S: D Range: (Close, Mid Range, or Far) Mid
Type of jutsu: Ninjutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity
Doton

Description: A clone of the user made entirely of earth appears

Weakness: It has the same color and texture of the earth; the more clones created the more chakra used

Name of jutsu: Illusionary Earth clone
Rank E-S: D
Range: Close
Type of jutsu: ninjutusu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity: (Katon, Fuuton, Raiton, Suiton and Doton)
Doton

Description: Similar to the Earth clone, only a genjutsu is placed over the earth clone

Weakness: illusion disturbed if touched

Name of jutsu: Earth Manipulation Jutsu
Rank E-S: B
Range: Close and mid
Type of jutsu: ninjutsu
Clan(Optional): none
Element Affinity: (Katon, Fuuton, Raiton, Suiton and Doton)
Doton

Description: The user charges his chakra into the earth and it allows him to manipulate the earth around him

Weakness: Drains chakra quickly

Name of jutsu: Earth spike Jutsu/ Multi- Earth spike Jutsu
Rank E-S: C
Range: Mid-Far
Type of jutsu: Ninjutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity: (Katon, Fuuton, Raiton, Suiton and Doton)
Doton

Description: One or multiple sharp earth spikes emerge from the earth to trap or kill opponent

Weakness: Single spike is easy to dodge

[freakyboyblu]

bump

[Kenshi]

Alright! I like your jutsu list, but there needs to be a couple of tweaks before I can give you the all-clear.

Name of jutsu: Earth Manipulation Jutsu
Rank E-S: B
Range: Close and mid
Type of jutsu: ninjutsu
Clan(Optional): none
Element Affinity: (Katon, Fuuton, Raiton, Suiton and Doton)
Doton

Description: The user charges his chakra into the earth and it allows him to manipulate the earth around him

Weakness: Drains chakra quickly

We'll use that as an example.

Alright, everything in green is good, orange is "iffy" and red might be potentially bad.
It seems as if you got the first part right, but when you get to your elemental affinities make sure you delete the Katon, Fuuton, and all the rest of the elements that you don't have. When a moderator reads that they'll think. OMG He has all five elements I'm not approving this!!!
Now I know you put Doton under the bottom, but it's best to do it like this.
"Elemental Affinity: Doton"
Also, the higher the rank, the more the description. How long does the manipulation last? How many posts? The more you describe what the jutsu does, the better the admin/mod will be willing to approve it. Whenever you make jutsu, put it into your mind like "If I was an admin or mod would I approve this?"
Also for your weaknesses, I think we can get a bit more, maybe some fatigue in there, and maybe you can put something about his strength is down for a couple of posts, something that you think would naturally happen after using this technique.

Alright I think that's it. Once you fix these they are fine.

[freakyboyblu]

Name of jutsu: Mole Hiding technique
Rank E-S: C
Range: none
Type of jutsu: Ninjutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity: doton
Description: User Hides in ground to avoid attacks or surprise opponent, also can be used to set traps, such as smoke bombs or exploding tags.

Weakness: User loses sense of sight.



Name of jutsu: Groundhog Decapitation Technique
Rank E-S: D
Range: Close
Type of jutsu: Ninjutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity: doton

Description: User hides in ground, and when the chance is right they reach up to pull opponent into ground, immobilizing them.

Weakness: Easy to dodge, Heavy chance to miss


Name of jutsu: Stone Lodging Destruction
Rank E-S: C
Range: All
Type of jutsu: Ninjutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity: Doton

Description: Using lose earth around them the user can cause chunks of rocks to attack opponent, the looser rocks take less chakra and to move the non-loose rocks takes more chakra.

Weakness: Possible to be hit by rocks in crossfire, can only be used effectively in rocky areas (Caves, Canyons, backed against the side of cliffs).


Name of jutsu: Rakagon -Lightning current Jutsu
Rank E-S: C
Range: all
Type of jutsu: Ninjutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity: Raiton

Description: When close combat fighting the user can shoot an electric current through opponents body. Also, Electrical current is shot through metal wire, stunning or injuring opponent depending on voltage

Weakness: Cannot use as genin, higher voltage requires more chakra




Name of jutsu: Earth Clone
Rank E-S: E
Range: Mid
Type of jutsu: Ninjutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element AffinityDoton

Description: A clone of the user, which is made entirely of earth, is created, it is ineffective as a decoy but can be used for recon or as a shields.

Weakness: It has the same color and texture of the earth; the more clones created the more chakra used

Name of jutsu: Illusionary Earth clone
Rank E-S: D
Range: Close
Type of jutsu: ninjutusu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity: Doton

Description: A clone of the user, which is made entirely of earth, is created, but the clone is covered in a gen-jutsu to make it look entirely like the user. Can be used for recon or as a decoy.

Weakness: illusion disturbed if touched more clones created takes more chacra

Name of jutsu: Earth Manipulation Jutsu
Rank E-S: B
Range: Close and mid
Type of jutsu: ninjutsu
Clan(Optional): none
Element Affinity: Doton

Description: The user charges their chakra into the earth and it allows them to manipulate the earth around themselves to create objects such as shields or spikes to help them in battle. However, his jutsu has limited range, the users chakra can only go so far from host.

Weakness: Drains chakra quickly, fatigue (the longer used the more serious the fatigue is(one post of this jutsu equals 2 posts of fatigue(when fatigued the user moves slower and cannot use this jutsu again.))).



Name of jutsu: Earth spike Jutsu/ Multi- Earth spike Jutsu
Rank E-S: C
Range: Mid-Far
Type of jutsu: Ninjutsu
Clan(Optional):
Element Affinity: Doton

Description: One or multiple sharp earth spikes emerge from the earth to trap or kill opponent. Most effective as a trapping technique, since the spikes get slower as you use more of them.

Weakness: Single spike is easy to dodge, also the more spikes used the slower they are

[Kenshi]

Approved

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